Reviews for L I F E
Sheila Ibre chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
Great style! Love is forever Eternity.
Hmm...
(Yes, I know my reviews are lame. But I always mean to say that your poem is excellent and you should keep writing!)
reikamae chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
This is great. I love how you chose to make the message subtle but there. I still hope to experience this 'love'... only now can I write about what I think it is. Good job, once again.
lil'poetgirl chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
hey, this poem is co cool! i love what you did with the 'hidden message' as you call it. thats ingenious, i could never write poems like that. its also very effective at getting the emotions across with so few words... keep writing!
Free Soul chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
WOW! This is so cool. I sometimes try something like this, but I never get it right. You did a wonderful job, and it totally makes sense and flows. I really enjoyed the word choice. It made it work that much more. Awesome job and just remember that you are a good writer. Thanks for posting this I enjoyed it a lot.

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