|Reviews for Living as the Rain|
| ccazale chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
this one is mysterious, never can i find so many rhimes like that, its very hard to understandbut if you read it with attention, you get it, and at the end yoyu get it to.
| Soviet chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
I like the flow that this poem has from it's rhyme scheme, well done
| suckerplucker chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
This is an interesting premise, but I'm not sure that poetry is the best medium for it. I think that this could be a killer short story if you developed it. You could set up a charachter that just feels so lost that they take any chance they can get to escape their life, but who realizes that life is really a good thing and that they miss it. Come to think of it you've really kind of developed that charachter here, I just think that it would be really cool to see this as an entire story.
I'm gonna read a whole bunch of your pieces, and so far I'm just astounded by your creativity! You have these great premeses and ideas and your damn close to expressing them very well.
| L.M.Crow chapter 1 . 4/16/2004
I like this one... very cool... i like the short and sweet, it works for this format... you get your point across as well... :)
| Dawn of Fire chapter 1 . 12/27/2003
This one is very...*can't find the word*...waiting? I like it a lot. _
| Rocky G chapter 1 . 12/19/2003
A really good poem, one that I enjoyed reading. The poem to me is a second chance at life.
| somethingpoeticandmeaningful chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
I love this poem, I think we all go through something like that, and it just sounds really inspiring. Anyways, I love you tons and I miss talking to you! toodles!:D