|Reviews for Potato Soup|
| The Wandering Musician chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
I like this a lot. I'm a big fan of random metaphors and similes, and this fits the bill. My one suggestion is changing the semicolon (;) at the end of the first line to a colon(:). It is a matter of preference, really, but for some reason it just seems better to me.
Daughter of the Faeries
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
Awesome! That has to be one of the coolest things I've ever read. I love it.
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King