Reviews for The spirit within chapter one
Ritt chapter 1 . 2/6/2007
What? THATS IT! Thats all of the story? you're not going to continue this? I wanted to know what was going to happen to Luna! This story was written in 2003 Right? So does this mean Luna has spent her life in that lab for four years? And is not going to be rescued? I really wanted to read more? But I guess you must have really bad writer's block so I'm not going to pressure you and if I did it in my statements above I'm sorry. It's just that was good start but I just think that it really needs a good middle and ending. But I won't force you. Hey i noticed all your stories were published on the same date. So does this mean you wrote them all then posted them here at once? Hey do you write your original stories anywhere else? Another fiction website where you post them up? Oh well I'll stop prying and besides you must be really busy. So I'll just shut up now any way great story.
amazed chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
wow...started off really good! im loving the story and cant wait for more to be posted up!
Meldon chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
If I was you, I would change the rating from G to PG.

Excellent descriptions. Keep on at it!