Reviews for Together Forever
Adam Carson's Voiceless One chapter 5 . 10/19/2003
Aw! Isn't that sweet! I wanna see more of Jade babysitting!
Ayx chapter 3 . 9/23/2003
It's a sweet story.. please continue. I know how one can be discouraged sometimes.. but you have a nice thing going so do us a fav. and keep writing
luvurflyingmonkey123 chapter 2 . 9/22/2003
yay! you updated! :-D I really like this story, it's so sweet and happy and fluffy, but that's ok.

It was truly hilarious to picture Davey playing barbie. Haha, :-D

Good job, I'll be looking for your next update!
Amane Andrsen chapter 2 . 9/20/2003
Your story is great. Insightful perfection.
luvurflyingmonkey123 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
THis is a very good start. I love AFI, they are my favorite band ever, and this is the first fiction I've ever read about them (well, at least Davey), and so when I saw this, I got very excited! I think you should continue, but try to add a little more description. Other wise, I love this story, and I hope you update soon!
anathalea chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
fluffy, soppy, sweet. you have good control of dialogue. keep writing _