Reviews for Second Rate
La Reine Plastique chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
very very well done! i believe everyone can relate it to ! (well, ALMOST everyone, at least!)
K.L. Dreary chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Excellent! 10/10

ThE tRees On FiRe! ThE tRees On FiRe! LeTs All jUmP iN tHe FiRe In ThE tRee!
Jilla de la Rio chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
This is really good. You put alot of feeling into it.
me10 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
a very strong and simple poem, i like! especially:

I wish that you could see inside,

See past all your selfish pride.

very good! :)