very very well done! i believe everyone can relate it to ! (well, ALMOST everyone, at least!)

Excellent! 10/10

ThE tRees On FiRe! ThE tRees On FiRe! LeTs All jUmP iN tHe FiRe In ThE tRee!

This is really good. You put alot of feeling into it.

a very strong and simple poem, i like! especially:

I wish that you could see inside,

See past all your selfish pride.

very good! :)