Reviews for Molly Smiles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() alkdfa;lksdf You killer! D: How could you hurt me do damn much... So beautiful. I hate it so much that William's gone... From the beginning I knew he was going to die but damn that's too much. You killer! Awesome sauce. -iCY- |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so sad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please make a different ending! it can't just end like that. i stayed up all night (its 3:36am) reading your story and then boom hes dead so i beg you please end it differently T_T |
![]() ![]() So, I didn't really know what chapter to put this with, so I'll leave it here. Just an inconsistency to note: In this chapter, Molly says her dad died of lung cancer, but we meet him later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No matter how many times I read this, I always get so choked up at the end. I tell myself, he's going to die! He's going to die! I know what's coming, but it always makes me want to cry. I'd just like to tell you how wonderful this story is. I'm sure I've written other reviews for this story, but I still want to write another one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() like how yu ended the first chapter; and .. i plan on staying here for a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story... But I cried at the end. I also have to ask what would have happened in the alternate ending, seeing as I hate sad ones. ~Kira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just ahd to come back and add this to my fav's list ] |
![]() ![]() Wah Why'd you let him die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was wondering, if you were to write an alternative writing, what would have happened? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, life.. An alternate ending would be nice, but in life there are no alternate endings. That's the good thing about stories. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE MAKE AN ALTERNATIVE ENDING! I can't stand it! Oh my god! Why can't they live happily ever after. I can't stop crying. I need to find a happy story before I turn out like Will... Oh my GOD! Oh MY FUCKING GOD! I'm so sorry for acting like this, but I feel like my world is going to end. My face is soaked with tears right now. I think I might be depressed for a very long time. Let me know if you know of any stories that would make me feel good. Again, I'm really sorry. It was a great story, but if you have it in you, could you really right a different ending? PLEASE? Thanks so much! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH God! I'm crying so fucking hard right now! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO! GOD DAMNIT! NOW I'M SO FUCKING DEPRESSED! Sorry... didn't mean to go off on you like that. Please say this is a dream... I love you forever and ever! sunflowersing |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD! sunflowersing |