Reviews for The Point of Perfection
TheGodMachine chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
This was such a cute story!
Triizore chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
You seem to have a bad habit of info-dumping. Instead of saying that the boys were like brothers or Tom's mom was like Brian's second mother you could have them say things that suggested it instead.

Also, when someone is stuttering use hyphens (-) instead of periods..

"Tom saw Joey standing in a corner talking to his friend Amy, a lesbian who met Joey when she was building a set for the musical he was in"

I just wanted to point out that this is incredibly cliche. What if he met Amy when they were lead roles in the school's production of Grease.

The story is cute, but it could use embelishment to make it less flat.
NakedKing chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
AW that was the sweetest thing I have EVER read! it was so cute and very welly written. LOVVEDD IT~
chinaangel chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Aw! I love it! WAFF, WAFF! lol! anyhow, really good stories, two-and-a-half thumbs way, way up!
Dianna
suninun chapter 1 . 1/8/2004
That's such a cute story! _ Nice work. Now you gotta write more and more fics til your fingers can't type anymore! I love your writing style. 3
hanako chapter 1 . 9/19/2003
Very well done. Especially for someone with no personal experience in this area. It's so sweet. Mucho kudos.