Yay! Another ally in the never-ending battle against the evil fiend that is skirts! Good stuff!

If PG in some way helped persuade you to post this story then I am SO deserving of a pat on the back! Or, maybe my lack of that foreign thing called sanity is, but that's not the point. The point -is- that: Chibi-Me-Z has a wonderful/funny/slightly sadistic story! Aren't writing unrealistic fics about innocent, sweet, totally naive girls getting abducted by evil, demonic bishes a whole lot of good family-type fun..?

*Mirei and Lei-Lei raise their sledgehammers and shout feministic war cries before beginning their bloodthirsty search for revenge*

Ah, I do love a good violent heroine, I really do. Can't wait to see Lucifer let down those icy walls (hopefully this will be done voluntarily on his part and not because Lei-Lei has shattered them with a very large metal stick). Also, I'm sorry to hear (read..?) that you're having troubles with your plot glue. Y'know, the stuff you use to stick all those random ideas together? I'd lend you mine, but I do believe Mirei may be using it to permanently shut Chie's mouth together... -_-

I'll have to do something 'bout that.

... Or not.

Anyway, very entertaining fic you've got going on here. I wonder what poor sucker is going to get wrapped up in Lei-Lei's interesting trip 'off-the-beaten-path-to-Florida,' so to speak. I'm also curious to see how Lizzy will react when Lei-Lei doesn't show up on time (or weeks later)... Hehe...

So keep up the great writing! I'm looking forward to more (very, VERY soon, right?)! -

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P.S. - Is there really a 'National Dress Up Like A Banana Day?' .;;

HOS: A hug? GOD's scary, you know that, right? A hug *shudders*

Sao: *throwing things out of her closet in search of something* Now, where did I put that lead pipe or the steel wire...?

HOS: *grins* Heh heh. Anyway, about that scholarship...

Sao: Truthfully, I went over what I had done, and hated it. I thought, 'Hmm, let's see what my best friend thinks about it' and she agreed with me, it was boring. So I'll write something for the next quarter...hopefully.

HOS: Which means we can go back to updating and posting regularly...well, not regularly, but we can go back to doing so.

Sao: Now, if only I could find that story...

HOS: I wonder what Lei-Lei's going to do. She might end up in trouble big time!

Sao: OOh, it's GOD they found, isn't it? Btw, I'm not sure if you've read this series, but there's this series, the Stephanie Plum series by Janet Evanovich that I thought you might like. Really funny, and it's in first person. I love it! Which reminds me, I'm on the sixth book...*debating on whether to write or read* I can't decide!

~Sao & HOS

Kera: *screeches in* YOUR STORY ROCKS! _ -

Holly: You're too hyper..shut up.

Kera: Hremph! You just don't understand true BEAUTY!..can I borrow Lucifer for one night? o_o Just..one? UPDATE I SAY, UPDATE!

You do realise that i have a rusty chainsaw ready for use if you don't update...Lucifer is the most dense idiot devil in the whole of creation...gee, Lei-lei said like what, twice, that it was just her...isn't it obvious that she broke the nasty window...puppy eyes...i didn't realize devils were softies...muahahahahaha...

This is great! Update! My very insanity depends on it!

Sao: *jumps on Lucifer's back* I can have you! You belong to ME!

HOS: *in the corner pouting* No fair. *to author* Will your version of God be like Lucifer? If so, he'll have some fan-girls too.

Sao: *currently tieing Louie to a chair so he can't run away* Yep, he will, but I'll still want Louie more. And in case you were wondering whatever happened to that manga thing I told you I wanted to post...

HOS: She's forbidden to do so until she finishes this story for this scholarship contest that's due next week. It should have been done by now.

Sao: So I was being lazy, so sue me! *starts to drag Louie in his chair out of the room* I'm allowed to procrastinate every once in a while. Besides, it's nearly finished...nearly...

HOS: Update soon, we'll be back. Um...*looks around* Where'd she go? And with Louie too?

~Sao & HOS

BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i am the devil! all bow down to me!

this is one of the best fics i've read so far! You're definitely going on my favs! (tears of laughter) BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

HEy! I got to read the prologue (mainly cuz it was short lol). Hopefully, I'll get to the first/second chapter soon enough.

WEll, it looks like it has good potential. You have a pretty original storylihne. Maybe since it's so original, it seems copied since it's not your average girl-gets-with-guy-and-separate-in-the-end type of story. Well, it's still only the begining right? If you change the ending, then it's completely original.

And as for the story, it seems interesting. Poor Lei-Lei... that sux, she can't go on vacation. that's like getting jury duty in the middle of ur one-month summer vacation. I wonder WHY they're kidnapping girls from Earth anyway. ANd are there more? Oh that'd be really interesting if there was someone else that was kidnapped too. and what are they gonna do to her _ . *shivers* dun wanna know lol.

And also about the religions factor, hahah it's not offensive (well not to me at least). CLAMP's Wish was equally enjoyable, and yet completely contradicting the bible, but it was fun... *gets all nostsalgic* Well, keep updating. No one likes authors who take aeons to update. Okay, goodnight. good job too!

Hehehehehe...

This is really funny...

It's really good...

More more More more...

*both Sao and HOs shriek like school girls at an Nsynce concert and jump on Louie*

Sao: You should be glad you have a fan club!

HOS: *to Chibi Me* And yes, that does explain why she's in hell. However, it doesn't explain why she *points to Sao* hears walls talking all the time. And she never drinks neon green stuff.

Sao: *talking to Lucifer* And then the wall said that she had run under my bed to hide from me. And you know what? The wall was so right! Of course, I won't tell you which wall, because according to Lei-Lei, you're a wall killer, and I don't want you to hurt my friend.

HOS: -_- Please, don't ask. I'm the sane part of her. I don't understand the original part of her. Last time I tried, it gave me such a bad case of a migraine that I was out for over a week. I've since then stopped thinking 'bout it.

Sao: *finally talking to Chibi Me* Update soon! I want to read more! Really, I do. It's so wonderful! Must go now. I might actually put up that manga thing sometime this week...

HOS: If we remember, us and our two minute span memory _ Until the next chapter

~Sao & HOS

P.S. Can we have Lucifer?

Saotoshi: *laughing and clutching her sides*

Her Other Self: I guess I'll review then. This was, as our friend Chris would say, 'Ha-ha-halarious!'

Sao: I wonder why she's there, though...

HOS: Update soon, we want to read more!

Sao: I only just realized that there's a manga section here, so I'm thinking of posting one I've been working on on-and-off.

HOS: Unless, of course, we become lazy and just decide not to do it.

Sao: Enough about that, I already love Lucifer! Very very very much!

HOS: But what about that key thing they were talking about? And the first person thing, we'll bare with you since we know it's hard to remember to put 'I' and 'me' and the such where you'd usually put 'she' and 'her' and so forth.

Sao: Well, this is getting rather long (as it often does with me, so be forewarned) so we'll go now. We'll be back when you update (if we're not busy).

~Saotoshi and Her Other Self

Nice story! I'm not exactly a Christian and I'm more leaning towards Taoism and Wiccan and both religions don;t have devils. Hope to see the next chapter soon. *looks at review list* Hope you're the first story in my review list to update to the next chapter... .