wow. i like it alot. but since it has suicide and cuss words, i think it should be at least PG-13.

I cried again. I've read this like 5 times and cried everytime. SO GOOD! umm but i agree with that other review, she wouldn't have just been forgotten, she might have been less thought about, but i still loved it, still cried, and all that stuff.
peace out-
somewhere

wow. i don't really know what else i can say about this. my best friend is sitting next to me and this story made her cry. i feel the same. your writing is so real and not sugared like the others. your stuff is emotional and like everyday life. keep on writing.
oh, and you're right:time does heal all wounds

i like this story but one thing isnt true some emotional wounds dont heal over time.

otherwise great job.

Oh, it's so sad. I imagine how utterly painful it would be for Garvey to know..it could have been stopped! The torture, the pain, and then, as you said, it is soothed and he moves on, until rushing pain fades to a dull, forgotten throb..where did that come from? Well, I've been reading your *inspiring* poems, so now I'm in a "poetic" mood hehe AWESOME! you captured emotions soo well!

~Kiara

Well that is very very sad. But i do have to disagree with you. I think you're wrong that people like Garvey would forget about her. I mean, my dad didn't even really know this one guy and that guy commited suicide and he still remembers him and how he did it and everything. And my moms brother commited suicide and even though i never even met the man i still think about him everyday. You want to know what runs through their heads right ebfore they do it. you know? But other than that i thought it was a very very well written story. I really liked it. Keep writing! very good story!