I'm feeling this poem 100%. I'm loving the rythm and flow. We would do so much to be with the ones we love.

It's so sweet.

This is just beautiful and very sweet, I love this poem it describes what im feeling right now, adding you to favs for sure :)

I started crying while I was reading this...I'm so in love with someone right now and this poem describes everything that I feel. The longing, the dreams, the hope. It's so beautiful, thank you so much for writing this

I like this one too...you're pretty good!

it's lovely...

this is the sweetest poem ever! it so emotional and deep, really good job :)

~AF

this is a BEAUTIFUL poem! great job!

That was beautiful...

aww dude, I like this a lot. I love the part where it's like:
"dont you know id cross the ocean
just to sit with you by the sea"
It's awesome. Anyways, good job heh.
-Mandy-

wow wow wow
that was awesome and yeah, just wow!
u have a great ability to write...i loved this poem...touched my heart cos I feel that about a person, even tho not in a loving way.
awesome.

O! Very poignant and touching! Very well then, you're on my faves.

Aw... It's all sweet. :D I liked it.

ah...very different from the typical love poem (which is a good thing). you express the feeling really well :).

-escape into reality

This really is very good. The way you use the words you choose makes the poem come alive...that takes some talent. ;)

Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

~Kar