Reviews for Broken Promises, Shattered Dreams
StephiePoo chapter 15 . 12/29/2003
i can say is awesome .one of the best ive read
shams chapter 15 . 12/28/2003
aw. so sad. jordan just loves her so much.
ok, well, another good chapter for you! and such a quick update!
shams chapter 14 . 12/28/2003
i love your story. dont get discouraged by people not reviewing. i think they are just too lazy. i know i am! sorry, its winter break. my mind just shuts down. but i still love your story!
ilovegeorge chapter 14 . 12/28/2003
ah ure stories r most def not going down! i luv it! its great...! i really like ure writing style! imma go check out ure other stories! update soon!
Rachel9 chapter 14 . 12/28/2003
Well I'm glad that you were able to use part of my frustrated babble from the review. I really liked this chapter. Although nothing much happened, it showed how much trouble Jordan is having through all of this. Also, I liked that you entered his Dad back into the story. Good work! Update soon!
MusicalMooky chapter 14 . 12/28/2003
Hello! Happy New Year! This is a great story so far. I hope that this time Serenity will be able to follow her heart. I'm so glad that Jordan has discovered who he really loves. I'm happy that he was able to stand up to his father. Please continue! This is an awesome story.
jules chapter 14 . 12/27/2003
wow! great story...sorry i never reviewed before. i had to cram for finals and then came christmas shopping...blah. well, keep it up!
Black Dahlya chapter 14 . 12/27/2003
We're just too lazy to review.
Will Klemm chapter 13 . 12/26/2003
Interesting. I would like to see if they get back together. That and i dont recall what happened to Serenity's baby. Maybe you can fill me in cuz i've prolly forgotten after all the reading i've done and such.
Rachel9 chapter 13 . 12/24/2003
Why didn't he say anything! Poor Serenity, she needs to come clear about everything with him. And I hope that was a ring that he bought! YAY! I also hope that when she finally does tell him that she was pregnant, he confronts his parents about it. Anyways, this chapter was great, just like all the others. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Will Klemm chapter 12 . 12/15/2003
the ending rather shook me up cuz it was all about jordan and serenity then BOOM nick calls making the reader and serenity have to go back into reality. Nice touch.
Will Klemm chapter 10 . 12/15/2003
the whole suicide thing was a nice touch but i think the talking of him cutting himself was a little odd. Almost like it didn't fit. but then again, it was who he USED to be...
Will Klemm chapter 9 . 12/15/2003
good chapter but i'm still wondering why Sara would have gotten engaged to Jordan if she truly felt he didn't love her. Maybe she can come back in a later chapter and wreck things with Serenity and Jordan or perhaps sleep with Nick!
Also, as always, the flashbacks were good touches
Will Klemm chapter 8 . 12/15/2003
still want to see how this all plays out...
Will Klemm chapter 7 . 12/15/2003
the last flashback wets the reader's appetite and that idea of having a guy write guy's parts is good cuz i swear when i read Ann Rice's vampire chronicle series she's all tlaking about the male vampires loving each other and such and it comes off as gay when she kept having them talk of their love for one another. Thought Jordan copping a feel was a little fast in this reunion to happen, but in a way i guess it works.
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