|Reviews for Feriael|
| Mary Lane chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
I was floored at the end, S.T. Marissa. Your language had lulled me into thinking that this epic, too, would end with Our Heroine invincible, but no . . . It's a powerful story. Life and death and all that. Poor Feriael - she's so lonely! Why have her be so gorgeous and so brave and so powerful if she gets nothing in return? It's jarring. Your vocabulary is astounding for a teenager. I had to look up "nock."
| Kell Hound chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
great job keep writing
| Danaerys chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
Beautiful poem at the end... You are a wonderful writer, keep it up! I think your summary is great the way it is :)