Reviews for Dreamweaver |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is so beautiful! you have great description and I love the repitition of "the dream-weaver comes," it just perfectly flows. my favorites are the lines in italics, they are so profound. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting concept, and well written too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That...was amazing! Excellent work! ~*~AbunaiChikara |
![]() ![]() ![]() All these line are good but definitely "she laughs as your essence begins to decay," is a standout line. haunting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah *feels dizzy* all your poems leave me in such a state of shock and horror...this is absolutely amazing..brilliant..I adore it... I love the imagery..the way you portray her...it's stunning. Btw you are the first person i see here who likes (or knows) H.I.M..don't they rock? Lol, gtg, Love, Mia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. This is incredible and beautiful. It is frightening, but soothing at the same time. You managed to balance the rhyming very well. This is just overall an incredible poem. There is not much else that I can say. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The dream-weaver sounds pretty wicked. I like the way the words create a picture for the reader. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I guess she exists, because I always have nightmares. Excellent! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great feeling to this - really haunting. Nice rythm and good imagery aswell, i can really see the woman. And she's quite scary. lol. p.s thanks 4 reviewing my work, it made me smile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this. Very provocative. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! *gasp* this was amazing, your descriptions were incredible and this 'dreamweaver' character really comes across clearly. i loved the ending, this was written so well! scary! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah... cool... |
![]() ![]() ![]() *is stuck in a state of fascination* that was incredible! absolutely ethereal, in every way. i LOVE how you created the character of the dream-weaver herself, and i also absolutely love the aside-like couplets in italics, they add a LOT to the overall effect. they rhythm in this one is suberb, the imagery is beyond anything i can say - truly transcendant. i love how she's dressed in white, it's not what you would expect so it reels in your curiosity even more. oh goodness, i have no idea where to start with favorite lines *deep breath* okay, here goes: "wandering through her realm of dread," "cursing their sleep," "the dream-weaver comes with crimson eyes," (that's scary and haunting and adds SO much to her character), and "she laughs as your essence begins to decay" ('decay' was a great wordchoice, i could actually almost feel that). superior piece of poetry here, i'm most definitely impressed. kudos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That...wow. Incoherent, sorry...my spine is tingling. My pulse throbs...I love it! The format and imagery of this poem are absolutely unbelievable...I was mesmerized and haunted...especially as the idea hits a personal note as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Creepiness abounds! This reminds me of the poem I wrote about eyes, somehow. Just the whole "dark nightmare" theme, I suppose. I like the first stanza best, I can definitely relate to that. To the waking up in the middle of the night, hot and cold, unsure if you're just waking up in another nightmare. Delightfully spooky. Kudos. |