That's it, I'm never going to sleep again. XD

I love the imagery, and the rhymes in this. The lines in italics are amazing and a little scary...Great job.

~winged one~

i love this...excellent words...

T

I was captivated by the title.

*creepy*

Your vivid descriptions just tingles my spine...especially the last two lines.

*looks around fearfully*

Beware the night...I shall most certainly hope I don't get nightmares to night..._

Great work on this one!

! I really liked the imagery in this poem as well as the theme. The lines of this poem may be short, but they are very concise. _

I would like to thank you for reviewing one of my poems, too! THX!

Lightly toasted,

Blankface _

imaginative, and a brilliant poem.

I liked the way you described the "Dream-weaver", and the little sections in italics was a marvelous stroke of genious. Various ryhmes helped the piece flow well, too. Great work!

~ I love this! It's very mystical though haunting. Clear description about the character. Keep Writing.

c. butterfly~**

oh wow, i love this one. its so well worded. great vocabulary and structure. definately going on my favourites

Love the style, beautiful imagery and a great sense of fear was passed it seemed. I loved it! Excellent work!

wow! i'm actually afarid of going to sleep tonight. hehehe. wow! i really like it. :)

Wow O_o thats really really really good. I know thats not really an enlightening review but this is wonderful. Great rhyme scheme. Makes me wish I was writing rhythmic poetry still; however my muse took a leave of absence and when she came back she forgot to bring her bag of rhymes, rythm, and meter.

Anyway, great great poem. I can really see this.

Wow! Excellent rhyming and a very interesting theme. Love it. :)

Great poem you have here. Awesome imagry and the word choices and flow were remarkable. Nice work.

Keep writing and thanks for the review.

-Seras

m, I agree with Mia lol won't sleep with the lights off anymore.. oh wait, I never do anyway, well I have the hall light on anyways *slaps myself* back to the point... heh. "Dreamweaver" wow what an amazing theme you have for this poem. It's so eery *SHIVERS* I like how you sort of did like subliminal messages with the italics "she robs you of life upon her sight so my dear beware of the night" UH.. WOW! Is all I have to say. You should be proud of this piece it's simply amazing. Oh and good vocabulary and descriptions as well.

*Jenna*

SCARY! After reading this I don't even dare sleep with the lights off!

*grins* That means: Good poem. And, I think it was slightly better than the other new poem (wich name I OF COURSE can't remember now...)

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4/5 stars