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Yay. About time sombody got a dreamweaver up! I have my own version myself now :P

wonderful piece! so well written, with rhyme and rhythm, your words really flow nicely together, and i really like the rhyme scheme you used. i really like this poem. it gave me chills down my back. great job! keep on writing!

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Nice! very good indeed. Dreams are cool. but i usually have nightmares O.o

Cool! I love horrific poetry - there's something very catching about it, at least as far as I see it. I seem to read a lot of it, anyway . . . O.o Once again, a very good poem! ;)

Tenika Dargan

This poem was awesome! I loved the rhyme patteren you had going too. Can't wait to read more!

Ohh...I like it! It's dark...almost gave me the chills..and made me see if there was some freaky old lady next to me..hahaha..This is really good..you describe it so well! -

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So, my dear, beware the night. -

Amazing! Brilliant! Creepy...! This is one awesome poem! Its so vivid and chilling. *shudders* Brilliant!

~ CoolBeans18s

That was one brilliant poem. I liked the flow of the words and the dark images you have created. It felt like one of the tales my grandmother used to tell me, although certainly darker.

Good work.

damn, Anjeni, this is awesome. Very creepy. But man, I love it.

oh thats really good and really creepy... very good vocab and rythming and creepy vivid images.

Nice haunting poem. It reminded me of a dream I had last night which seems so surreal, I felt everything. There was this girl in white floating on top of me while I lay on my bed. She made me move and I couldn't even make myself move. Everything was so dark except for her - she was glowing. It was creepy. Anyways, this poem adds up to the nightmare I had last night. What a chill! Keep up the good work )