Reviews for Times
Mime chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
This is pretty neat, the way you kept reapeating times. Keep writing!
lil'poetgirl chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
hey great poem, but its kinda creepy, cuz the ending makes the persona sound suicidal..well written tho...
me10 chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
interesting train of thought type of poem. great work! but dont let people make you hurt yourself. you are worth more.
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
this is so good and i can relate..but sometimes the people that hurt u most are the ones closest to you..
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
Good poem person
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
Wow, this is amazing... very deep. Good job.
AVIGON chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
This is one of those topics that are really "popular" on FP, but you managed to lift it above the average... I don't know why, but it's different; as if you found a way to work around the cliché.