Reviews for Chocolate Chips, My Haiku Collection
Keep it 100 chapter 3 . 10/19/2003
Powerful work.

Heart of the Sword
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Great images to fit the emotion.

Heart of the Sword
Cirien Phoenix chapter 4 . 10/18/2003
Hm... This was okay, but I don't think I like it as much as this other haikus.

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
Cirien Phoenix chapter 3 . 9/25/2003
Agh! You killed fruit! (*pauses*) Cool... I like it. It sounds very painful and very cool.

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
Cirien Phoenix chapter 2 . 9/22/2003
This was freaky and great! I think you did nicely with this one.

Cirien Phoenix
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
I'm not much for haikus, but I may as well review. You got the pattern (5, 7, 5) very well. This sounded pretty.

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
ShadowGal chapter 2 . 9/21/2003
I'm rather fond of this one's last line.
ShadowGal chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
I really liked this one, especially the first line. Nice job.