| Reviews for Sparkle Sparkle Little Locket |
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  tera noe chapter 2 . 11/30/2003 great intro!) I love the simple simplicity of things |
| tera noe chapter 5 . 11/30/2003 hmm...I like your suspense in the beginning with Mark and the man, and you describe the scene really well. But, later, when you get to the ogre, I don't really have a clear picture of what he/she looks like. Also, wut is this silvery substance? Wut does it look/smell/feel/maybe taste like? |
 Gloom chapter 5 . 11/27/2003 Mehehe! I almost forgot the plot of this story. But ph34r not! I will never forget j00! It was extremely short, unlike my works, and well, was... easy to follow. I can't really think of much else to say. That Ogre thing is kinda freaky like XD Chelle |
| hidden relevance chapter 5 . 11/25/2003 i still don't like the old guy! hey.. don't sweat it.. i'm in DEEP trouble cuz of how long it's been since i posted... college is evil |
| minime chapter 3 . 10/13/2003 I'm sorry, I've been busy lately, and I haven't had time to check. I love this chapter! It has a lot of detail, and the suspense is great. I'm becoming very antsy for the next chapter. Please update soon! -minime |
| Gloom chapter 3 . 10/13/2003 Oh! I love it.! Go go! Such a cliffhanger! |
| Hidden Relevance chapter 3 . 10/12/2003 Ok.. so if the white dude has kidnapped his family.. he's officially on my hitlist.. not a nice guy.. very well done building the suspense... YOU MUST UPDATE! so there... |
| An Inside Joke chapter 2 . 9/27/2003 This is even more interesting, I think. Please continue. |
| minime chapter 1 . 9/24/2003 Your story is very interesting. I like the mysterious events at the end, and your story flows well. A small suggestion is that you could put something in the beginning to immediately entrance the person reading it. The advice is just a side note though, and it does not really matter. I like your details and how you do not put in too many but just enough. How you tell his past eases in as well. Please continue soon. -minime |
| bribitribbitt chapter 1 . 9/21/2003 Awesome beginning! Please hurry up and continue. No, actually, chapters are better when you take your time. So take your time. Or whatever. Brittney |
| Hidden Relevance chapter 1 . 9/21/2003 o...enter the mysterious man at the end of the first chapter...i'm already intruigued...i'll have to watch for more of this... |
| Abigail Marie chapter 1 . 9/21/2003 Sounds good so far. I'm intrigued. Please continue |
| Gloom chapter 1 . 9/21/2003 O I like this idea. I'll keep posted - adds to author alert O... I onder whats begun? |
| An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 9/21/2003 Very intriguing. I hope you post more. |