YAY! I love the Faust legend, and this is just perfect, I can't wait for the next chapter! "Hey, no talking to him while you're with me. He is strictly on the silent treatment."

I liked that part.

me up! I love it! It is so funny, hahaha!

I love this story! I love Faustian themes (in fact, I spent five whole months studying different Faustian works). Although the one I like best was Goethe's version.

Anyway, please continue. I like the modern spin you've made on the theme. I'd like to see more.

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