Hi Jess! It's Jen23! What can I say about this except that THIS was fantastic. I think it takes extreme talent to write poetry. Many of times I have felt like this but luckily the falling can stop at times. Great job, Jess. Jen

Pensive and passionate...loved it. I demand more! Later.
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Awesome. I love the repetition, and the way the rhythm just flows. Great poem!

I enjoyed reaing this. The lines so simple yet hold so much meaning and with a style all your own. Very cool.

Thats one of my new favorites, that is cool!

O_o woah... that's good! I like the repetition! It was really easy to get in to the pattern and rhythm of it (which is hard to do without rhyming). (btw, i had just posted that piece and *pop* review! thanks I got that bracket thing from Whisper by Evanescence) Anyway, awesome possum poem!

This was very good also. I'm guessing it's the sea you're talking about, and how the waves crash onto the shore, and the cliffs.

The ocean, perhaps? Hmm, intriguing. The connection between moon/tides maybe . . . lovely either way. Thanks for your reviews!

Beatuous comparison to the endless plunge into the sky. I like it.

Wow... deep. So deep that I don't really understand it. but beautiful, nontheless! great job

Kimmie

i dont think it was confusing at all. some of my poems end up sounding confusing and then people understand them. i have yet to figure this out.

anyways this is a great poem. personally this reminded me of someone holding on to their last strand of hope, continually fightning to keep it. very creative. _

Wow. I don't know if I understood this the way I'm 'supposed' to - I mean, I don't know if I'm interpreting it the way you intended, but as I see it (your reaction and emotions to the sea/waves) feels very real; very nice. You've certainly managed to get your feelings across, somehow; indirectly. I love this part: "You rise / You fall / You surrender / To the inevitable / Crash" I'm not sure why, but that's just a part that really stood out to me. Great work on this!

great! it's a freeverse right? well, it's an awesome freeverse...

It's good.. you express the emotion very well and the way you repeat it is good ...it get's a little repetetive but nothing I would change _/ JMBunny

Interesting to say the least! I like it alot ) It certainly explains the sea. Thats for sure but did I miss what it was meant to explain? . I'm so stupid .

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