|Reviews for Are You Online?|
| Caffeinated Cupcake chapter 1 . 5/21/2007
so so so so bute, and everyone can probably relate i know that feeling, of not knowing where they are or if they just are ignoring me or...oh look at me, you've got me ranting. congrats! it takes a lot for that to happen. you should be proud. i really like this; good job!
| Chidori Nadare chapter 1 . 2/17/2007
It is quite a good poem. It's funny yet weird at the same time.
I can relate to this because it is true(especially in my case)
The ending is very good(my favorite part).
Keep it up!
-music is everything
| Mistress Jakira chapter 1 . 5/30/2005
Hehe, that's pretty funny. I like the end, too, when it talks about knowing where your friend is and makes an emotional appeal as well as a humorous one. I know the feeling! _ Cute!
| unerasable words chapter 1 . 4/13/2005
Just stumbled across onto this poem, it's sweet. I like the last three lines; can so relate (ha, that word is so overused -_-). Good job. :)
| in theory chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
Dude! This rocks! I use msn alot and I often wondered the same. Nice work )
| firemounrain chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
I too curse the vagaries of chat programs. AIM Away is exactly the same...
| AnimeArrow chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
:'( aww... reminds me of my friend who is never online... And when he is, he doesn't talk to me... :'( well, back to the point, I really like your poem, because it's something people can relate to. It's cute, but at the same time sad, and a little hopeful.
| raven-birdie chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
This is a good poem, sort of a modern twist on waiting for your 'love' or whatnot. Imagine if Romeo & Juliet had this type of communication system.
The ending I like the best (safe from the night). It expresses the care the person in the poem feels about the other the best I believe.
| TaNg1 chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
that is so cool.
| Jessica Tudor chapter 1 . 12/21/2003
Hehehe I can relate, only I use AIM now. I think a lot of people can. Nice poem. I like the opening especially.
| Insomni chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
LoL, I have to say.. I do that to my friends a lot _; There are the people who wait, and then there are the people who avoid.. I avoid :p 6/10
| JTierra1988 chapter 1 . 11/8/2003
OH sometimes I've felt the same thing and you sit there waiting and waiting and sometimes you do burly miss it and gr! Well I love this poem the most ...mostly cause I can relate to it and you expressed it so well. Well I reviewed all of your work! KEEP WITING! _~ JMBunny
| ScoobyGal55 chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
That was really good. The begining couple lines where the perfect match for the story you were trying to tell. You captured a normal person paranoia almost perfectly.
| EmmeliaF.Aberdeen chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
I was tempted by your promise to review the stories of any and all who review this poem... so here I am.
I know this feeling all to well... it's kind of a self-confidence issue, isn't it? The person who's POV it is is worried that their friend doesn't really like them all that much... and thus doesn't want to talk with them.
| Tyronica chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
This is really nice. Everyone can relate to being paranoid.