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Beautifully witten. I really like the rhyming scheme; ababcc, interesting, I've never seen that before, but it works so well I wonder why I didn't think of it myself! Very little is more inspiring than the night sky. Night Lights reads very well out loud, it's meter is nice. I thought this one was a nice contrast to you other poems which are in a more concret form and this one is a little more traditional. Both are amazing, and it's nice to see someone who can write both! You're very good at writting poetry, I'll make sure to look you for you.

I can't believe you did this in high school. It was beautiful the way you described how the stars felt envy of their friend the bright, white, heaven. I too believe and just know that there will be sweeter days there. Beautiful job, Jess. Jen

As per usual - favourite lines are (dun dun dun):
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Across that wall of darkened night,
The timeless diamonds did their best.
They sparkled in suspended flight
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I love those lines. I am now going to read the second Night Light's poem. Toodle ooh!

I don't know what to say to this other than it's wonderful. I like the story it tells, it's so relaxing and bright.

There are no words yet invented to describe the depth and beauty of this poem. Guess that sums up my feelings on this one...later.
~Shuffle Queen~

I an very impressed with this one. The entire poem poured from the screen to my soul. I thank you. I will spend the evening reading the rest of your work.

Wow, this is amazing. It's definitely going on my favorites list. This poem flows really well! I love the rhyme. It works so well.

That was great. Just...amazing. I can't think of words to describe it.

Thats cool too, god you are good!

That was beautiful. I love the sky at night also.

Ah, I've read "I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud"... not that I remember what it said... _
But your poem, it's beautiful! Elegantly written, and the imagery is wonderful. I would say my favorite bit would be:
"The timeless diamonds did their best.
They sparkled in suspended flight."

Beautiful, mystical-sounding poem. Wonderful imagery, well-written and best of all, it really lets the imagination wander. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

Quite elegantly written, as if through the eyes of a frivolous dreamer. I enjoy your usage of imagery so effectively, as it is not too heavy but subtle enough for us to think and feel. Interesting symbolism of the diamond and metaphor usage.
Please do continue writing.
-Celestial Sailor

Be-autiful! I could certainly take notes from your excellent writing... you never fail to amaze me. This poem rocked my socks :)

Kimmie