You can easily distinguish how outstanding this piece of work is from the encouragement of others. Like most reviewers here, I have to say that I adore this poem. Wonderful imagery, nice manipulation of Wordsworth. And my love/hate feelings towards stars helped me really feel this. Well done.

I like the last few lines a lot _ It's good! You have an obsession with stars? lol jk by the way you might want to fix "And gleam to me a peace not knew" accidental k? or known? I like the format of this poem much better It's well written and the rhymes are good _/ JMBunny

I love this..time to read your other one..

This is full of absolutely gorgeous imagry.. I'm blown away by the way you can describe things so easily, but so beautifully! Wonderful job on this poem. The flow, the description, the language, the message, the feeling.. all of it is amazing.

Thanks for the reviews, and I'm glad I read this poem. You're an incredible writer.

M...Like the sequel, good rhyme scheme, structure, and subject. The night sky...it has always been an attractant as well as a mystery.

This is lovely - well done.

I like the "bright white light" vowel alliteration.

Interesting that the stars would care to be admired, nice personification. Adds to the sense of real harmony.

The rhyming pattern is really good.. I don't fancy rhyming poems very much 'coz the words that rhyme are rather standard, but this one was a pleasure to read. (:

~ Very beautiful! I love the rhyme scheme. Keep Writing.

c. butterfly~**

The rhythem makes for a very enjoyable read.

This is so beautifully worded...it paints such a mysical picture...

~God bless~

Really like this! Thanx for your review. In answer to your question it is not an insite into my brain. Brain is a nick-name for a friend of mine and its about how she just wanders off the planet to her on little world n how I am so jealous she can do that! But back to the poem! Excellent to read, write on!

awesome job! beautiful imagery and metaphors! love it!

Wow. and I mean the kind of WOW u say when u dont know what to say becasue its like ya'know...

...wow! lol. im not that good at reviewing, I just do it alot.

p.s. thanks 4 the review, and write more soon!

I don't know who William Wordsworth is and I've never read “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”, but I really liked the way this flowed and such. I think you did a great job with this. Excellent poem!

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame