The rhymes, the rhythm, it all fit together so well. 'Among us three' sounds really cool, and I especially like the first stanza, the 'gentle thoughts and sweeter days' part, lines above and below.

Really great.

Beautifully written.

This is a great piece. Vivid images and elogant word choice.

"Across that wall of darkened night,

The timeless diamonds did their best."

I really loved that line.

You had a great flow to the whole thing as well.

Cheers.

Good! I think this is the kind of poem that would wash over like a wave if read to me...I like those kinds of poems, by the way...great!

~Kiara

Thanks for reviewing my poem! Now I'm gonna review yours. Obviously. I loved the poem! hugs it Teehee! ; Uhm yeah! Keep writing! skips off to write my story Oh, will you do me a favor and review that story? 'House In The Darkness'? x.x I kinda want more reviews. Anyways! adds to favorite author's list Byebye.

Awesome. Good poem.

Big O rules!

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

wow. that lightens my mood a bit.

This is really stunning and meaningful. Re-reading it many times to understand its significant meaning was really worth it. I congratulate you on a wonderful poem written. :)

great! I love it! the format is wonderful, and it evokes nice images and is mellow with out being depressed (a feat few can achieve). very peaceful.

Nice rhythm - I can see the Wordsworth in there.

Although perhaps some of the coherence of it was lost through trying to make it fit with the structure...? I don't know, but some of it seems and sounds unnatural and a bit forced.

Meh, being picky. The content is beautiful - I'd like to see a version in free verse.

Good structure, rhythm, and rhyme. Also quite atmospheric. I like it :)