Reviews for Needs a title
jsullins chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
i like how you did this one one phrase at a time, or just one word... very cool.. um an idea... hmm.. maybe... cut, or red tears... something i dunno... but yea its really good!

-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
I just had to read this poem after reading the title, hehehe. Good poem, jut please never do that, I take those things pretty seriously. There's better ways.

Great work once again.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
Wrist or crying.. I love that "my wrist is crying" thats very cool but i dont like the words so spread out... great subject metter tho i have lots of cutting poems