|Reviews for Take A While|
| shadowofadoubt72 chapter 1 . 11/7/2003
Hmm, this was a good one. I liked it.
| Crucified Sanctity chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
YAY! Optomism! WOW! Sorry, anyways! The poem! I like the 4 stanza, 4 line thingy with it rhyming. That was great! Specially coz the last line has such a different feel to it. The rest of the song rolls round your mouth but the last line is sharp. BAM! Good one )
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| Lucy Ricardo chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
That's really good. I like this poem. Keep it up.
| William chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
ur story would realli make sense if i could read :P keep on writing!
| Irised chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Aww...this one's pretty, and so hope-filled! Keep writing!
| My Little Poet chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
i like this. very short, sweet, straight-forward. :D good job!