Reviews for My Child
emptyword chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Oh, oh. What can I say in response but Amen! His desire is incomparable. He has yearned for us for eternity, suffered for so long, and when we take His hand, when we accept His calling and walk with Him, when we turn to Him, then his longing is fulfilled at last and we too are made full. What an enjoyable expression of God's longing for us!
SomethingSymbolic15 chapter 1 . 3/21/2006

Excellent job. *goes off to read more*

God bless

P.H. Wise chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
Very nice. I like the passage about the green pasture, and lying next to the All-Mighty and listening to His heartbeat. Powerful imagery. :)
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
brilliant poem
DarkSetzer chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
i like it

-the guy that doesnt have a religion and doesnt believe in god but still likes the poem
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Once again, great work! It's cool that your writing for God. Great work!
Silver Lake chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
Wow, I love the line "For I too need to feel your love". It really hits you that He wants you as much as you need Him. Really comforting poem.
Nilah Brandybuck chapter 1 . 9/24/2003

I love how you portray His Love!

God's Awesome

In Him

HoldinOn2Him chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Oh thank you!. I really needed to read this. it's just so beautiful. I'm sure it will touch so many. I'm so happy i read this , I really am.

God Bless.
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
That was beautiful...

Very touching. A wonderful poem of God's love for us, and the happiness He wants us to have.

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)