Reviews for Aqua
Bleedingtree chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
AH! I TRULY LOVE THIS ONE! love the first three lines! tis great!
elen sela loomen en omen te elvo!
~Kim
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Usually prefer earth or fire over water, but whatever. A very nice poem! I love the last line... Keep writin'.
Dream of Hope 594 chapter 1 . 10/4/2003
i love the element water its my favorite and i love the poem its cool
Grim-reaper-Zakku chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
nice poem.. i've always loved water hehe its so beautiful keep up the great poems

-seren
Shimagami chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Intruging.

As you said, water is a rather beautiful and yet mistyrious element.

Wonderful feeling. Nicely exicuted.

But...

Penguins will be the ones to take over the world, not pandas.

And if there must be a seconde nt race it would have to be monkeies.

Thank you.

~Shimagami~

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Misty Woods chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
I like your use of repetition. Beatiful poem!