Wow, the imagery was simply priceless in this piece. ) Nice lyrics, they really make you feel what is written.
~Lidless Eye

Lots of amazing words here for this song. Your writings aren't so cliche, it's not like the other writer's on here who seem to write about everything the same *yawn* it's nice to see some new words put together with newer ideas as well. Good job once again.

*Jenna*

I love it. Just beautiful.

i really loved this, the summery already had me loving just because its the best summery i hvae ever seen (i mean there really are some bad summeries out there...lol mine definitely included) mk so ill just go through my fav parts, i read the song about 3 times, each and every time feeling something else from the dark aura of the poem which contains so much, it was just so full of...raw emotion maybe?

"The night is haunted with sounds that scare the dead" just very chilling in what it implies when you really really think about it, i thought it was very effective.

"I hate you with a passion, yet I can’t leave" and also the other line related "I hate this life with passion, yet somehow I can’t leave" i really found it moving, and the way you put it i thought was perfect, every word, the format, the lines you sued to build up to them, everything about them was a work of art, very muchly loved.

"You've broken me down

With a well chosen sound" wpw i just loved the "well chosen sound" bit, there was something so fitting about it, it really made it work and was very very right.

great great great work chica, this was stunning work, i loved, kudos!