Reviews for Abandon Your Fear
redfeline chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
Excellant use of words. Moves you, as well as grips you and pulls you into it.
POAS chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
If this isn't what I'm going through right now, I dunno what is! MM! B-E-A-utiful! (Bruce Almighty)

not sure yet chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
aw, thats very mournful and sweet at the same time, muchly enjoyed this one, love the second line esp since it seems to contrast so much with the rest of the poem, anywayz, awesome job
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
*applause* i love this! especially the second half, it really seemed to come alive. really awesome imagery and comparisons throughout. good rhythm, as well. the last half of the last line even game me a shiver. :P *ehem* yes, my favorite bits and parts were: "lovelorn poetry my never drip from your lips," "though you hide your jewels jealously from the world," and "i can keep a secret." awesome first piece! can't wait to read more. kudos chica. :)