Aw, I really liked this chapter.

Just read the story so far, interesting.

I look forward to reading more,

* Books4mE *

happy..happy...nice...not quite joyous, but getting there. thank you, for writing such an awesome story.

sweet and short to the point. u cudnt hav dun this chappie with a nicer ending! XD!

I really like this story. You've obviously thought it out really well. One thing, though.. You should get a BETA reader to go through it. There are a few places where there are grammar or spelling mistakes, which makes it a lot harder for the reader. If you're reading your own story, you don't always catch things because you're reading what you remember writing.
Anyway, great story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

ooh update! a mreading ur other fics...u hav a really nice writing style btw

I like your writing style, but your character development is a little odd. You project an image of Bri that makes sense, but then throw in things that are not just out of character for her in an understandable way, but in a way that seems like you couldn't decide on one character so you tried to put to embodied in one. ie/ Bri on a basketball team? It makes no sense with her character at all.

Anyway I like your idea though, hope to see more soon!

aww...poor bri. it must be hard for her. especially because her parents hate him so much and it doesnt seem like she hates him. it seems like she thinks she should hate him, but cant.

Hi...it's me. Does anyone know why my story only appears under PG13 in General and not under All ratings or

G-PG13?

hey this is good

im excited for this too. :D :D :D

hope to see more soon

-peachy-

Good chapter. Very short, but still good. Update soon.

That was a very good begining, I'm already looking forward to the next chapter. Try to make them longer.

wow...awesome beginning.

This is really good. I wish you would write more, and more often. You are a very talented writer, but you only write a few chapters every few months.