Reviews for Chronichles of My Dream World
Aurora Elvenstar chapter 2 . 2/20/2004
I loved the funny parts. You are very good at describing battle scenes.
Amora E chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
Amora E chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
Amora Elvenstar chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
Amora Elvenstar chapter 2 . 2/14/2004
Hey, I finally read it. Really good. Now u can't get onto me for not reading it. La. Hurry up with the next one. Chapter I mean. You're slow hurry up! Talk to you later. ~Amora
Aurora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
Great story. I think that you should write more to it.
Vaio chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
I love the story and entire theme, but I know whats going on in the story. Other readers may not understand everything so I would work on your sentence transition, spacing, and of course the basics always (grammar and spelling.) Keep it up my cat warrior friend more adventures soon k! :-)
Lauren chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
interesting...
No Name chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
one of the most intrestin stories i have ever read, i say u should submit to a publisher...

btw, i would never steal on of your stories
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
intrestin story, maybe you should send it to a publisher...

btw, i would never steal ur stories
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
one of the more intresting stories i have read, try giving it to a publisher...
Hazara chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Good! If you don't write more I'll hunt you down and kill you. Leaving only a bloody toenail for your family.
Raining Dreams chapter 1 . 9/24/2003
Well, it IS nice, but it could use a little improvement. Im not flameing, Im just trying to help you out, as others are more likely to catch your mistakes. For one, space your dialogue a bit better. It confuzzled me O.o;. Proof-read you things, and if you're writing in notepad like I am, copy & paste it onto an email or something and spell check there. Other than that, it seems like a great story! Keep it up!