Reviews for Sacrifice
Roccilaa chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
Good storyline, but lacked action got me suffering. Overall though it was a great story.
Eveningstar1 chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
This is awesome! Great job with the descriptions, a few grammar errors, but the storyline is intriguing. Keep up the great work!
Decrescendo chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
Hi! This story is awesome so far...you made a few grammer errors, but nothing big, and the overall storyline is intact and very intriging. I like it. In fact, you have even inspired me to register at this site...maybe I'll even get off my lazy butt and post something. Thank you, and update soon!
Ontological Synaesthesia chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
Great story. The description is wonderful. Please continue!