|Reviews for Spice|
| Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
thats so qt! lol, i really like it, its...i cant relate to it but it just seems so sweet, lol. i love the end particularly. love and good luck. Twilight
| My Little Poet chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
lol, i like how it doesn't make much sense. that's very interesting how it jumps from place to place. it's very realistic because that's how many people think. :-)
| Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
It makes sense to me I cna completely realte its an excellent poem & i love your rhymes cuz they're so uncommon!
| JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
yep, i've been there. great stuff. I loved the line:
But I'm not there anymore
You showed me the door
ouch! that was harsh, but it hit the nail on the head. Excellent work.
P.S. I'd love to hear from you via email.
| Nerf chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
I reli like this. it has a reli strong ending. Well done!
| pippin tomson chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
It's good, for a poem that came off your fingertips, better than that even.