Reviews for Spice
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
thats so qt! lol, i really like it, its...i cant relate to it but it just seems so sweet, lol. i love the end particularly. love and good luck. Twilight
My Little Poet chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
lol, i like how it doesn't make much sense. that's very interesting how it jumps from place to place. it's very realistic because that's how many people think. :-)

good job!
Rebecca Kelsey chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
cool
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
It makes sense to me I cna completely realte its an excellent poem & i love your rhymes cuz they're so uncommon!
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
yep, i've been there. great stuff. I loved the line:

But I'm not there anymore

You showed me the door

ouch! that was harsh, but it hit the nail on the head. Excellent work.

P.S. I'd love to hear from you via email.

Keep writing!
Nerf chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
I reli like this. it has a reli strong ending. Well done!

XXNerfxx
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
It's good, for a poem that came off your fingertips, better than that even.