Reviews for Untitled
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Loved the imagery. Emotion packed piece.

"The yin and yang collide

Forming the perfect puzzle of deceit"

Great lines. I enjoyed this. Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
deepdown chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
'The Yin and Yang collide'

what a line... this poem is so smooth, so well written, it knida took my breath away. wonderful metaphors, and beautiful imagery.

well done, keep it up!