|Reviews for Untitled|
| Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Loved the imagery. Emotion packed piece.
"The yin and yang collide
Forming the perfect puzzle of deceit"
Great lines. I enjoyed this. Keep writing!
| deepdown chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
'The Yin and Yang collide'
what a line... this poem is so smooth, so well written, it knida took my breath away. wonderful metaphors, and beautiful imagery.
well done, keep it up!