Reviews for Windows
Ayx chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
WOW...

Ayx
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Wow... Amazing poem... I love the ending :) Keep writing.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
wonderful poem! well written, powerful, insightful, with beautiful imagery. love the metaphors too. great job! keep on writing!
LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
It's beautiful, peaceful and charming. It's a little lonely, but loving as well. I love it.

Bless.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Awesome.

~Heart of the Sword
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
That was excellent. Utterly...

l.

I just had to read it over and over again, I liked it so much. Good word choice and flow. You expressed 'windows'...the eyes...the soul...magnificently. I loved the depth of this piece.

It's official. This is going in my favorites _

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
eloquently written. I have seen some sub-par work on this site, but this poem really strikes me as beautiful. You truly have a way with words, they flow very nicely. This is probably one of my favorite poems I've seen, and I've seen quite a few. excellent! ~salt