|Reviews for Halle, Halle|
| PinkLamb chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I think it was formatted great! It shows the side of child abuse most people don't done. Please read my stuff too!
| MistrissD chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Its so depressing but so wonderful, i love the repitition of 'halle halle' between lines. So wonderful .
| Lady Gerbil chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
i like it.i don't like the way it wuz displayed..i think it could be shown in a better format..but i like you put together your little book,include this one.
| James Lagoski chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
This is an interesting read-
Thanks for the time you've spent reading
and commenting on my work-
It is what gives me inspiration to create forever-