Reviews for Halle, Halle
PinkLamb chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I think it was formatted great! It shows the side of child abuse most people don't done. Please read my stuff too!
PinkyCD
MistrissD chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
Its so depressing but so wonderful, i love the repitition of 'halle halle' between lines. So wonderful .
Lady Gerbil chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
i like it.i don't like the way it wuz displayed..i think it could be shown in a better format..but i like you put together your little book,include this one.
James Lagoski chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
Dear Janelle-

This is an interesting read-

Thanks for the time you've spent reading

and commenting on my work-

It is what gives me inspiration to create forever-

Best Wishes

James