Great chapter! I really like the alliance idea. Adam seems like a sweet boy. I was thinking-this is just an idea- that you might want to do a little writing in Adam's shoes. He's a cool character. Great improvements. I like the fact that you're including Jack's home life. I really don't understand the whole library beinging a no thing, but that's probably because I love libraries, and use them a lot. -The library is actually a good place to be at my school!- But, that's just me, I'm a book-ish person. Great story! Keep it up!
~Lor

Great chapter! It's a little short though. It makes you scared. Please continue to update. I have nothing else to say.

I like your style of writing. It's good. Most of us know how it feels to not really be a part of a group, or be completely kicked out. You might want to develope Jack's character a little bit more. This IS just a suggestion. Here are some questions that you might want to answer.
What's Jack's home life like? Does Jack get nagged by her parents a lot? Are Jack's parents nice? Mean? Strict? You can learn a lot about a character from their family life.
Is Jack hiding something? Like her true feelings?
How do the rumors REALLY make Jack feel?
Don't get me wrong. You have a great story going here. I got these kind of comment from someone, and they really helped me to think about character development, otherwise, you're doing just fine. Keep updating, and please think about my suggestions. They helped me a lot, so I want to pass on the favor.
~Lor

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! This is amazing! Really well written, and a great story line! Please continue, i can't wait for the next chapter! _

~Tamarisk~

p.s. i have added your story to my favs! *angelic smile*