Reviews for What To Live For
Wasted Postage chapter 1 . 1/23/2004
very emotional and intense. I loved it.
~*~AbunaiChikara
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Awesome... you captured a lot of feelings in this poem. Great work!
pippin tomson chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
a heart felt poem, please keep writting more like this.
spicey ice chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
there is a lot of meaning in this poem and you have thought of really cool lines. i think this poem rocks!
Soryu chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
You know? This poem would make an excellent song... I was listening to "Easier to Run' by Linkin Park at the moment I followed the alert to this piece, and the tune aided the poem in getting to me... I'm jealous, mah friend XD

"And with your help I learned to stand" Absolutely inspiring, keep it up! Farewell!
me10 chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
And slowly but surely I turned away,

Deciding to die another day,

i love those lines. this was such a beautiful poem, i loved it. im sort of thinking maybe the person who took the pain away, could be God..but then again it could work with anyone. i can definitely relate.

great poem. iloved it.
Sa-ah chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Amazing... It truly expresses how a suicidal person feels. I loved it. Keep up the good work!
Whitesiren chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Interesting... I thought it was all going to be depressive. But i think its a bit inspirational in the end.

"When all was black and hope was dim,

I relished in my large pool of sin"

like the lines. _

~Rheia