Reviews for love
Aimee Raven chapter 1 . 11/22/2003
Wow...now that was deep. Really meaningful, somewhat evil...but brillianrt! love, Mia
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/8/2003
That's sick and twisted, hehehe. The stupid game that everyone plays at times. Great poem though, I loved the last paragraph, it was great. cruell, but great, :-).
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
I love this poem its completely true... but the daughter line doesnt make sense... marvelous poem tho!
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 9/26/2003
Much darkness and angstyness...I like the "Trust me..." etc. really gave the piece emphasis on certain points. Thanks for sharing this...

Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)