Reviews for Online and Offline Love
Creative Pumpkin chapter 10 . 8/17/2010
Creative Pumpkin chapter 7 . 8/17/2010
haha no, this isn't really a long chapter, you should see a bunch of others that i read, but i really like short chapters better...
Creative Pumpkin chapter 6 . 8/17/2010
Math is so not boring!
Creative Pumpkin chapter 5 . 8/17/2010
:O was the offline ken wearing white? no? yes?
Creative Pumpkin chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
HAHAHA! I don't even know why i'm laughing, but this story is AMAZING! anyways, i like how you changed the point of view, but with the same events and stuf...
Amber Salgado chapter 1 . 4/29/2008

since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams

thank you,

Amber Salgado chapter 10 . 10/18/2007
i like the story but its a bit hard to understand so i couldn't completely finish it i mean wheres the true mystery and stuff the story's good but seriously re-write it to make it clear i mean no offense or anything its really good other than that

MysticMaJix chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
hey this is really good. I like it so far!
Sarah-Ray chapter 11 . 9/17/2007
why did u stop updating? (

its realy a good story

the last update was on 07-04-04

and thats 4 years ago lol :P

so plz apdate when ever u can )
MonkeyMohawk1 chapter 11 . 2/17/2006
update...thats it..
a chapter 11 . 9/20/2005
aw just when they were about to get set up you stop updating! *cries* this is a pretty good story so i hope you update cOz it seems you havnt updated for like a year so yehhope to see you update soon.. keep up the good work
the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 11 . 5/19/2005
Hello! I'm reviewing now! YAYness! _ Anyways, please update soon! I really like it! _ This story reminds me of Please Twins! _;; Well, keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 4 . 5/19/2005
Very nice! *claps* Cliffhanger! _ Anyways, lol about the bagel stuff. I had a bagel once in this crummy store and it tasted real bad! _;; Anyways, I love your story so far and I shall *victory music* read more! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 2 . 5/18/2005
Hi there, Rella! _ Anyways, nice job! (Oh boy, am I going to review every chapter of your story?) I'm a slow reader. T.T Well, great job! ~the key of the twilight
the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 1 . 5/17/2005
*jumps up and down in joy* YAY! Thankies my reviewing my story! *bows* I really appreciated that! _ Anyways, I like this story and I'll hopefully read some more once I have a little more time on my hands. I'm glad you like Kilo because most people don't! lol (By the way, Kilo is probably around 17 or so...) Well, bye! ~the key of the twilight

P.S I did get the Children of the Devil ideal from Spiral! You're pretty observant! _
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