| Reviews for Online and Offline Love |
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   Creative Pumpkin chapter 10 . 8/17/2010 :O OH NO! IT'S KEN! |
| Creative Pumpkin chapter 7 . 8/17/2010 haha no, this isn't really a long chapter, you should see a bunch of others that i read, but i really like short chapters better... |
| Creative Pumpkin chapter 6 . 8/17/2010 Math is so not boring! |
| Creative Pumpkin chapter 5 . 8/17/2010 :O was the offline ken wearing white? no? yes? |
| Creative Pumpkin chapter 3 . 8/17/2010 HAHAHA! I don't even know why i'm laughing, but this story is AMAZING! anyways, i like how you changed the point of view, but with the same events and stuf... |
| Amber Salgado chapter 1 . 4/29/2008 hello, since i have read your story and loved it can you do me the itsy bitsy favor of reading my first ever, baby story I Am Brandy Williams thank you, Amber |
| Amber Salgado chapter 10 . 10/18/2007 i like the story but its a bit hard to understand so i couldn't completely finish it i mean wheres the true mystery and stuff the story's good but seriously re-write it to make it clear i mean no offense or anything its really good other than that -Amber |
| MysticMaJix chapter 1 . 9/18/2007 hey this is really good. I like it so far! |
| Sarah-Ray chapter 11 . 9/17/2007 why did u stop updating? ( its realy a good story the last update was on 07-04-04 and thats 4 years ago lol :P so plz apdate when ever u can ) |
| MonkeyMohawk1 chapter 11 . 2/17/2006 update...thats it.. |
| a chapter 11 . 9/20/2005 aw just when they were about to get set up you stop updating! *cries* this is a pretty good story so i hope you update cOz it seems you havnt updated for like a year so yehhope to see you update soon.. keep up the good work |
| the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 11 . 5/19/2005 Hello! I'm reviewing now! YAYness! _ Anyways, please update soon! I really like it! _ This story reminds me of Please Twins! _;; Well, keep up the good work! ~the key of the twilight |
| the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 4 . 5/19/2005 Very nice! *claps* Cliffhanger! _ Anyways, lol about the bagel stuff. I had a bagel once in this crummy store and it tasted real bad! _;; Anyways, I love your story so far and I shall *victory music* read more! ~the key of the twilight |
| the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 2 . 5/18/2005 Hi there, Rella! _ Anyways, nice job! (Oh boy, am I going to review every chapter of your story?) I'm a slow reader. T.T Well, great job! ~the key of the twilight |
| the-key-of-the-twilight chapter 1 . 5/17/2005 *jumps up and down in joy* YAY! Thankies my reviewing my story! *bows* I really appreciated that! _ Anyways, I like this story and I'll hopefully read some more once I have a little more time on my hands. I'm glad you like Kilo because most people don't! lol (By the way, Kilo is probably around 17 or so...) Well, bye! ~the key of the twilight P.S I did get the Children of the Devil ideal from Spiral! You're pretty observant! _ |