Reviews for Online and Offline Love |
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differentlyhappy chapter 4 . 10/4/2003 i like it! it is really good. update soon |
Zoey7 chapter 4 . 10/4/2003 glad ya like my new story! _ this was such a cool chapter. it was nice to read more about her normal life too. and they didn't meet yet! or did they? is Ken the online Ken too? so many questions! only you can answer them by posting chappie five! *Zoey7 |
DreamNightmare chapter 4 . 10/4/2003 yay! u updated! lol neways i g2g cuz my familys here 4 sum party...i jus wanted 2 leave u a review sayin i still love this story! hope 2 c more soon! DreamNightmare |
DreamNightmare chapter 3 . 10/4/2003 aww! this is a cute story...ive been like sam b4...n i share the same name! lol...neways i saw ur story as a fav 4 a-light-from-your-darkness n i decided 2 check it out...I LOVE IT! lol hope u update soon n keep up the great work! DreamNightmare |
Incubabe chapter 3 . 10/4/2003 This chapter was good too! I'm actually enjoying it now and liking the direction it's taking. The whole Ken POV thing is totally up to you. I don't think I would've done it personally but it works well and you know straight away that it's not Sam so there's no problems there. I like the mirror of the storylines but from Ken's perspective - that was a really smart move. Yeah, I'm definitely getting into this one! Can't wait to see more! |
tats chapter 3 . 10/1/2003 WOO-HOO! Proof read ur stuff. u make simple mistakes like saying 'there' instead of 'their'. I did read the italics this time! :D go me! :D Bad part is (don't take this personal, you'll get better with being a 'guy' the more you write) he sounded REAL gay. uh, well, not a gay guy, but a bisexual girl who can't decide on how to be bi. Guyz r a lot more laid back, he'd probably be either more bored with these phone calls or more arrogant. Or both. I don't think a guy would look for his stalkers, but an arrogant one would definetly test them. But an arrogant one would go beserk if a girl REJECTED him. This one is turning out to be very artificial, he's arrogant at times, but he's REAL calm about everything. Too bad I lost a link to a good story from a guy's view (hp fic, but good pov). It really sounded as if I'm reading a guy's thoughs and stuff. Sorry about that critisism, I'm gonna be a sectarist. i read a lot of behavior science. :D lolz. |
EchoesOfReason chapter 3 . 10/1/2003 oh if they aren't one in the same Ken then there's gonna be trouble in paradise! Well of course I reviewed again, you did post didn't you:) No seriously, I like this story, it seems to be going somewhere really good, so I can't wait. This chapter was very insightful. It did tell us a lot about the popular all knowing Ken from Sam's school. And that's a good thing. Get to know two different perspectives. I like it a lot. Well that's enough of my senseless talking, I'm going to leave so you can get another chapter written up so you can post and so I can review again...ciao! Love always, A-Light-From-Your-Darkness... by the way: if you're into romance I suggest The Real World by Chelsea Plum, or just a really nice story: Uprooted by Twizzlers. BYE!...UPDATE!:) |
Kierst chapter 3 . 10/1/2003 very nice story! i can't wait to see where it goes. ::falls off her chair:: |
Kaishiou chapter 3 . 10/1/2003 Hm...interesting.I like the way you wrote your stories from different characters' point of view. Keep up the good work. |
darlene chapter 3 . 10/1/2003 hi there! i know you don't know me, but i just happened to come across your story and i would just have to say.. it's it marvelous! it's really wonderful.. i mean the way you present it is really good.. and i trust you that romances doesn't develop in a day! i hope you continue this and keep up the superb job! i'll see you around! |
JazzeeT chapter 3 . 9/30/2003 u have a really great story going on here. interesting but i was like y are gurls calling her phone.. then i realized taht it was ken. update soon |
LaserStrike chapter 3 . 9/30/2003 that was a cool chappie I loved Ken's POV and it kinda made me glad that Sam did reject him in the last chappie afta hearing his side of the story! |
Zoey7 chapter 3 . 9/30/2003 thanx for the review! its much appreciated! _ i'm glad you enjoy my story so much. *grins* and yes, i loved this chapter just like all the other ones! it was so cool reading it from Ken's POV, ya know? it made it more interesting to read a guy's feelings. i cant wait to see what happens when they meet in person! oh and i posted a new story, its not fantasty like my other one though. just thought i'd let ya know! update soon! ~Zoey7 _ |
Incubabe chapter 2 . 9/30/2003 Cool chapter - I like how Sam's mind works. She's constantly questioning everything and that's exactly how it is in real life. Nice! As for your question; I think the whole story should be told from Sam's POV. If you start chopping and changing from one to the other it may get confusing, especially if there's an online convo in there... Just my opinion... Nice work, enjoying it! xx |
tats chapter 2 . 9/29/2003 :D thanks for the 'thank you'! :D it's nice when someone does that! :D lolz. kk ur italic thoughts r killing me, i don know y, but i just can't mak myself read them. lolz. kk. u should make the chappees mor complicated. otherwise, it's just too dry to read. like eating half coocked cheese-cake - there's taste, but it's still not ready, not complete. (k, may be cheese cake was a bad example, i eat half coocked cheese-cake and i like it. uh, unfriend french fries?) oh, may i barge in and ask u to devote a moment of ur time to reading a story of mine? I don usually do this... and i just wrote it. luv, tats. |