Reviews for Online and Offline Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this is good stuff. Im gonna keep on reading for sure, Thanks for a great story! Hey check out my stuff PLZ and review! ~burningforrevenge Thats me above. Signed: Burning For Revenge |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i LOVE this! such a cute fic and you're really popular, too! D this goes on my fav it's awesome! but i hope the communication opens up between ken and sam soon. can you do me a favour and check out my fic "protector"? it would really be appreciated thnx! ~k8 |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol love it still! hehe the online conversation was cute too bad she kept lying to him though. i wanted to scream at her when i read that but i guess we all do stupid things like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww so CUTE hehe uhh no i shouldn't think there's any school with that name! okie reading on now this is an excellent story! ~k8 |
![]() ![]() hey! its getting even MORE intersting! o yeah n email me when you update.. guess i forgot to tell u last time... *grin* -THE RANDOM CRITIC- |
![]() ![]() ![]() quite the interesting chapter. but honetly i thought it was a little rushed, you know stuttering sentences, rushed conversations. but it's okay it still made good time. the chapter did explain a lot, especially how desperate some of the girls were. well once again, good chapter and i can't wait for the next chapter. love always, a-light-from-your-darkness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great new chapter! I'm glad you updated! Just one thing... didn't Ken talk to Sam for a totally shallow reason - help with his homework? You confused me because later on you said he didn't want anything. But I love Online and Offline Love, it's so great! I can't wait for the next chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, i love ur story. Im a sucker 4 romance but all the other stories i read r too alike. too cliche. Ur story is diffrent. i like it and please update. If u r not gonna update in 2 weeks i will give up on this story. I think that steven is ken online. he used hid best friends name as a lie online. u should place hints in the story so we can try to figure out who online ken is. Anyways, update! |
![]() ![]() you knew that sam would get the leading girl role.. and ken would get the leading guy role.. But, that makes it more better anyway. Hmm I wonder what Ken's fan's want. I hope they're not too mean to Sam |
![]() ![]() ![]() now I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() O WOW! another CHAP! mayb you should update everyday . id b really happy..lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic now. Great work! Continue please! -[Tru] |
![]() ![]() *shudder* i wonder what those girls are gonna do..this story is going along great, update soon or my brain is gonna be working 24/7 trying to figure out whatz gonna happen next..update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story so far, but it's confusing because you keep changing tenses...try to fix that 'kay? also when you're nearsighted, you always wear glasses, hun. I would know, since I'm nearsighted!*grins and adjusts glasses* |
![]() ![]() ![]() *smile* this is pretty sweet. I like it a lot. I can't wait for the rest!I'm adding you to my favorite stories list so I promise to be back! Just... please make sure that Sam gets out unscathed! Toodles! |