i vote sam's pov! hey can u email me whenever u update? my addy is

thnx!

-THE RANDOM CRITIC

Good story so far cant wait to read more!

Lauren

i loved this chappie! it was funny how Christina and Steven kinda ganged up around poor Sam. gee, now doesn't that sound familair...its happened to me too! lol

i feel sorry for Ken. having Katie around ALL the time...poor guy.

can't wait for the next chappie. update soon! _

NOO! How often do you update? I really don't like ending it at chappie 5 :(

LUV SAM AND KEN!

This is pretty good. It has an interesting plot line.

I think you should use more description. It's really helpful to describe things to get one of your character's feelings across.

Also. When you write the convos between online Ken and Sam, can you not abbreviate? Because I can hardly read it, and I'm sure a lot of other people can either. There are also alot of spelling mistakes. Just read over your work before you publish and it will be a lot better.

I'm really glad that you have a story about people that somebody met online, I met my boyfriend online, and we've been going out for almost 9 months now. :-D

Good job, I'll be back for the next chapter.

Aw poor Katie!

Haha this chappie was still pretty esciting though, and about the POV of the next chappie, just do what a mate told me to do and 'let your senses guide you!'...although when he said that I was driving and started laughing and then I nearly crashed into another car so although that advice was pretty much shit for me...hopefully it'll help you!

And sorry for ranting on about nothing!

:S

I LOVE IT! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! SOO COOL!

Very nice chapter! Hmm...I don't know what view is fit now. Maybe a Ken again. I'm wondering about him a little.

One day Sam must meet online Ken...one day...i hope. lol.

An interesting story (I just started reading it). I like the concept, though I agree with DreamNightmare that is is going kinda fast. Slow it down a little. I'll have to check out some more of your stuff soon, I guess.

aww she missed their meeting! I wonder what online Ken's going to think about that! But hmm she did get to know offline Ken better...

ken's pov

just a bit short but still good! You should definitely do a Ken POV in next chappie! I also cant wait till Sam mets online Ken! YAY

garg! why didn't she check if offline Ken's shirt was white! garg lol

Hey! Won-dee-ful story! I really like how it is going so far. I keep thinking something is going to happen or this is really that, but then I find out its the exact opposite of what I thought, but then again...maybe its not. And now I'm just confused...lol, and I love it when stories do that. (Maybe I'm not the only one confused by my review...hehe)

Hope to see updates soon! You are doing great!

This is such a cute story, Cleopatra. Keep writing it! I can't wait to continue!

By the way, what colour was real life Ken wearing?;)