Reviews for Online and Offline Love
Bright Indian stars chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
dont make it ken's POV just continue the story it's really good... and keep it up...

i mean keep up the good work ...
DreamNightmare chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
lol...a-light-from-your-darkness DOES rite alot in her reviews lmao...u should c 1 of the reviews she left me...it kept goin n goin n goin n...u get the pic...neways i love this story...but u seem 2 b rushing it a lil rite now...maybe try 2 rite a lil bit more details? i dunno...jus a suggestion! great job!

DreamNightmare
differentlyhappy chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
great chapter! i hope you update soon and a little bit of a longer chapter next 2
Midnight Shadows chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
I like this story so far. It's sounds ALOT like my life. I'm hoplessly obsessed with instant messagers.

Now I'm going to read the next chapter!
Zoey7 chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
oh no! they didn't get to meet! how sad ( and the online Ken seems so nice too. i wish ALL guys were like that...

and make the next chappie in Ken's POV. i really like reading his thoughts and stuff. it adds another level to the story.

can't wait for more! update pleaz!

*Zoey7
tats chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
Poor Kens... :D should we number them? hm... lolz. :D

Guys, they just have the WORST timing in the world... :D I bet Ken (offline) lied to Sam too...

U made a mistake in the italics u said: "I can help the offline Ken first, then come back to see the offline Ken, it’ll work right?" second paragraph. :D think u meant one of those to be online Ken. :D *winks*
tats chapter 4 . 10/6/2003
lolz. i didn't mean that I-better-get-what-I-want-or-else, I just sort of meant... well, i don't really remember what i said at all... :D lolz.

i'm sorta late reviewing this chappe... oh, i can already see it: StevenChristinaLove. :D lolz (just spoiling things. :D)
EchoesOfReason chapter 5 . 10/6/2003
You're evil. First you make Katie seem so stupid and annyoing and it was all over some childhood promise. Well I like it all the same. I enjoy this story. It's quite comical yet serious at the same time.

But poor online Ken, you know I think I know why he wasn't onlilne, BECAUSE HE WAS STILL WALKING HOME! Okay okay I'll stop, but I'm seriously starting to believe they're the same person so there...I know I'm begin childish...it's my job. Anyway, great chapter, UPDATE SOON! I'm waiting for the next one...ciao!

Love always,

A-Light-From-Your-Darkness...

p.s. sorry for the short review cuz i'm cold and i have to write another chapter of my stories so sorry!
Emma chapter 4 . 10/6/2003
I like this story. I can't wait to see what happens. Please add another chappie soon!
SAngel chapter 4 . 10/5/2003
an excellent way to end the chapter
T. Riddle chapter 4 . 10/5/2003
Woop. I really like this. Keep on writing and hurry up. I can totally relate to Samantha so its awesome. Yeah, great story.
EchoesOfReason chapter 4 . 10/5/2003
oh I'm gonna get you good. You just had to throw that twist into it didn't you. I mean she was just there to meet this supposedly completely different Ken and then she runs into...*sigh* Well it was still a great chapter. I liked it a lot. When did you update because I wasn't able to check my e-mail for a few days *stupid brother* But Yeah...Great chapter! I loved it. So interesting. Steven...hm...got my doubts about that guy. Christina and Katie...*ahem* SLUTS! I mean... Ken...now there's a name to remember! All right I'll shut up now. Oh soo glad that you're reading The Real World...That's a GREAT Story. Well yeah...I'll stop now. But uh. Update soon cuz I wanna know what that Slut Katie is up to *mumbles something about doors* and I'm waiting for the Online Ken to meet up with her and see the way things go that should be really interesting:)

Wow. I just noticed that I write really long reviews...aren't you proud of me:) Okay, Okay, Okay...I'll shut up now and let you write the next chapter...ciao!

Love always,

A-Light-From-Your-Darkness...

I'm Lovin IT!
i-like-music chapter 4 . 10/5/2003
lol, great story, although sometimes I have problems with understanding what the online Ken is typing on aim. I can't wait for more chapters to come, how will their first meeting be? (I'm going to meet online friends for the first time soon in real life, I'm so excitied!)

I like how the offline Ken is sick of his fans, and think that Sam isn't into him:)

nice work
LaserStrike chapter 4 . 10/4/2003
lol wicked chapter!

I totally cant wait till Ken and Samantha meet! (Yay)

Y does Steven hate Christina...I kinda missed that part is he gonna show up in future chaps!

Uh...that's all

Update soon!1
Heart-of-Glass chapter 4 . 10/4/2003
Excellent story! I can't wait to read more! This is almost like my life, I love it! I'll be waiting for updates!

Peace,

Ashley
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