|Reviews for TheCastleOfShrelth:Part1 of the 6thGradeChronicals|
| Review chapter 1 . 2/13/2004
Man, your grammer is jacked up, but good story ;D
| Future Great Author of the World SKB chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
It caught my attention. Some indentations would be helpful (although this could be my computer's fault).
You could combine your sentences into paragraphs for easier reading and also watch your spelling.
Besides that I loved your story! You had me thinking Akeela's story was good, until she read it out loud.
I think the girl obsessed with calculus is hilarious as well as the blackmarket and bar in the bathroom. So not
normal! I like. What happens next? (I'm hooked!) Keep up the great story-writing!
| R.N. Johnson chapter 1 . 10/3/2003
This is great!