Reviews for Lit string
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
Yep, I've been there before. An excellent feeling was portrayed there. Beautiful stuff and excellent rhyming, I loved the last two lines. Keep it up!
Papillons Noirs chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
Ouch. That sounds bad (the day, not the poem)! This sort of seems like humor, though. Anyway, sorry if it's not supposed to be funny.
Nerf chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
This is reli gd! i luv it!

i reli like the repitition of

'And I walk home with a look of 'I'm fine'

Well done!

XXNerfxx