Reviews for The darkened church
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
Another great religious poem by the RandomGoth! YAY! You are a really awesome poet. I'm gonna check your writings out more when I find more time to do that. Until then...

write on!
Getuie chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
I felt the admosphere you were describing and couldn't help but think of some spiritual warfare... maybe that wasn't your intention, but there's definitely a dark admosphere that you're describing... tangled among the guilt ridden believer... *shrugs* well written
GarethNelson chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
this poem is absolutely filled with some deep emotions. while reading it i could picture someone vividly sitting in the church crying.

good piece of work